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Send Me Into Lovliness

Your sweet voice,
gently rocks me to sleep.
filling my head,
with sweet dreams.

Dreams of you singing me,
'I wanna be your boyfriend'
asking if I love you too.
Holding me close,
I lay my head upon your chest,
I hear your heartbeat,
and it sends me into loveliness.

Then the record stops,
and the dreams fade away.
then I remember that you've gone,
and I start to cry.

I go to your grave,
I see the scattered leather jackets,
photographs and letters,
put there in honor of your memory.
Tracing my fingers over your name,
I smile to myself,
and say with one shining tear,
" I miss you, my lovely Joey."

Author notes

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this is number 2 of my Joey poems...the last wasn't as good.
R.I.P Joey Ramone 1951-2001

the man who sends me into loveliness : http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs17/f/2007/128/9/d/Joey_Ramone__by_13LivingDeadGirl13.jpg

His grave : http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/5/57/Joey_Ramone_Headstone.jpg

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  • ParadoxicalMetaphor
    July 20

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    i love how this tells not only your emotions, but also a story. i look forward to reading more from you!


  • xxuglyducklingxx
    June 14
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    Powerfully Beautiful

    Very nice write. I'm so sorry for your loss. You've got a great talent. Keep up the amazing work


  • ScarletLetter
    May 11
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    i can't tell you how sorry i am for your loss..

  • ScarletLetter
    May 11

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    ""I see the scattered leather jackets,
    photographs and letters,
    put there in honor of your memory.
    Tracing my fingers over your name,
    I smile to myself,""

    my uncle had a son,
    no one knew until the day of his Wake...
    his name is Damian,
    he looks just like his dad.....leather jacket and all..
    it's difficult to talk with Damian, I fight back tears every time...the kid's 16 and falling fast....his dad left and never said goodbye..

    here i sit in this uncomfortable wooden rocking chair balling my eyes out yet again - this contest brought out so many more tears than I anticipated ....

    thank you for your entry,
    in a way i'm glad it's made me cry.

    ~*SL*~


  • Darkmoon
    April 2

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    The part:
    Your sweet voice,
    gently rocks me to sleep.
    filling my head,
    with sweet dreams.

    Dreams of you singing me,
    'I wanna be your boyfriend'
    asking if I love you too.
    Holding me close,
    I lay my head upon your chest,
    I hear your heartbeat,
    and it sends me into lovelines

    bysides the "i wanna be your boyfriend" this reminded me of my boyfriend. I love my head on his chest and listening to his heartbeat. When we can't lay together like that, where we're just laying together and talking. I just miss it so much. I wish we could live together now. If you want to know the rest(the secert[spelling]) let me know.

    thanks for entering. Good luck and i'm sorry for your loss.
    ~Edna~


  • Umi Juvariel
    March 25

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    Losing love is indeed one of the most shattering emotions one can feel, and when you realize they are gone, it hurts all over again. This was an excellent view into this emotion of many who may never feel it. Great write and good luck in my contest.


  • Amandainlove
    March 20
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    This was cute.
    Good luck.


  • Remnant
    February 14
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    Touching very much so, Thank you


  • The Otep
    February 11

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    This is amazing (and I think the other one was good too!)
    I love this...the tone and the message is great. It made me cryyy..
    "Send Me Into Lovilenss" os an awesome title too!
    Def. one of my favs from you!!
    Love you, Punkalicious Princess

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