I can't recant today's unfair barrage
I comprehend the demoralization I delivered
the root of melancholy me,
a hollow granite heart
drowned out by lonely laughter and vacant wisdom
sorry is what I am but can't convey,
unable to utter
sour, I sit, embarrassed reluctant to feel as I did yesterday
I'd rather feel things I've never felt, love, hope, and peace.
I shall ingest some humility, digest sincerity,
and prevent spewing more hate.
No friends to turn to or loving arms, only my
self remorse deafening every quiet moment.
bitter is better
unnerved my strength flayed from my chest
replaced by reclusive tears
godforsaken with despair oozing from my pores
drenched with puny self proclaimed honor
go now, I quit, with proper pondering
I shall rise above, one day soon
this man anew
Author notes
I had to get this out, it hasn't been 'poeticized' yet
Please tell me what you think
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I feel the emotions coming from this poem, the sadness, regret, depression, the honesty of the person with his feelings within himself. Yet at the end there is hope..
I shall rise above, one day soon
this man anew
Great poem..
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I'd start 'poeticizing' by spelling the title correctly.
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that's a good tip
good place to start, eh? I don't think I'd have caught that, thank you for pointing that out I wish everyone was as helpful as you.
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