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The Chase

Let me think about it

You say lets go slow
I say lets go fast
You say lets have a quiet night
I say lets have a blast

You hug me tight
I say let go
You kiss me on the cheek
I say no

Now that we've got it
Let's get on the dance floor
Dance with me all night
But don't ask for more

You ask to see me
I say not tonight
You need to see me
This isn't right

You ask me what I'm doing
I say why do you care?
You want to know where I am
I say that's not fair

You say you want to be with me
I say it's just some fun
You want to be with me forever
I say but we're still young

You say this isn't right
You're meant to be chasing me
I say I'm not like other girls
Love doesn't come for free

Now that we've got it
Let's get on the dance floor
Dance with me all night
But don't ask for more

You say you want me to be yours
I say I belong to me
You say you don't understand
I ask why you can't see

I say I'm ready to be yours
You say you took your time
I say I had to check you out
Is that such a crime?

I've thought about it

Now that we've got it
Let's get on the dance floor
Dance with me all night
Then you can have more

Author notes

10 minute write so extremely rough. Any opinions welcome =)

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  • LotusRyda
    June 5
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    sounds like...... nvm.... you get my point.... XD

  • hard to get is so much fun they say....have fun with your life and enjoy whats there but dont wait to long or some may walk away.

  • Evangel
    March 16
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    very good, liked it a lot. I don't mind that it repeats, some just do.


  • Sam.M.
    February 12

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    I thought it was nice, a bit long and a bit repetitive at times but still nice. At least it had a happy ending.


    • Crazychook
      February 12
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      Thankyou I might edit it later and try to make it a bit shorter, get rid of some of the repeating stanzas, I have an idea of how to do it but still maintain the effect it would if it was repeating.

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