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Razor

Rubicund drops
Assuage my
Zenith
Of pain becoming
Red rivulets.



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Picture Credit: http://slasherreborn.deviantart.com/art/Razor-21482135
10 word acrostic

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  • SimplyNoodle
    February 12
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    wow i really like this, great job! Tell me again how you are so good?


  • Jesann gold member
    February 12
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    Great Acrostic !!!!
    Great imagery.
    Very well done.


  • Luciferschild
    February 11

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    nice use of words and wonderful imagery, to the point where the picture is not really needed. thank you for entering