craniums crumble to dust
& schizophrenia's cerebral waltz
darts across frightened eyes,
as she recognizes
this degenerate corpse
as her own.
Author notes
20 words.
Prompt is the picture:
http://silent-reverie.deviantart.com/art/Surrender-23096096
For all-intensive purposes, the ampersand (&) doesn't count as a word.
I'm messed-up 
A contest entry
- xox Been a while Quickie #1 xox by Poetic Tasha.
700 points, ended February 11, 2009, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Fluff is great, but it really doesn't help; honesty is the best policy.
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WOW i absolutely loved this! you did a wonderful job i dont think anymore really needs to be said
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damn! you nailed this no doubt. this is wonderful. great use of 20
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powerful ending, brilliant write as always
thanks for entering.
best of luck
love, light & laughter
Tasha
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Oh very nice my dear cohort!
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Good luck!
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