Feathered fears,
like arrows, pierce
consciousness.
I bleed my last
remnants of hope
into gathering
darkness…
…in a silent scream.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://silent-reverie.deviantart.com/art/Surrender-23096096
20 words
A contest entry
- xox Been a while Quickie #1 xox by Poetic Tasha.
700 points, ended February 11, 2009, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Excellent description of image...I feel alone...
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Thank you... your kind words are much appreciated... Hope you're having a lovely day... and not feeling alone anymore
Ken
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Excellent poem, fits the prompt perfectly.. I love the first stanza the most and the last line. the imagery is vivid. and I've been to this place before.. very lonely.. but memorable
good luck
kat
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Wow !!!
An excellent write...wonderful interpretation of the pic prompt.
I love it.
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wonderful & strong take on this prompt
thank you so much for writing for me
best of luck
love, light & laughter
Tasha
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