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Muteness

Feathered fears,
like arrows, pierce
consciousness.

I bleed my last
remnants of hope
into gathering
darkness…

…in a silent scream.



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Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://silent-reverie.deviantart.com/art/Surrender-23096096
20 words

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  • amysticwriter silver member
    February 14
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    Excellent description of image...I feel alone...


    • KayJay
      February 14
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      Thank you... your kind words are much appreciated... Hope you're having a lovely day... and not feeling alone anymore
      Ken


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    February 13

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    Excellent poem, fits the prompt perfectly.. I love the first stanza the most and the last line. the imagery is vivid. and I've been to this place before.. very lonely.. but memorable

    good luck
    kat


  • Jesann gold member
    February 12
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    Wow !!!
    An excellent write...wonderful interpretation of the pic prompt.
    I love it.


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    February 11

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    wonderful & strong take on this prompt
    thank you so much for writing for me

    best of luck

    love, light & laughter
    Tasha

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