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Home, now.

Missing image
Inhaling deep
the scent that nature spreads.

Almost dusk as the sun sets on the horizon.

Wisps of mist appearing,
creeping up.

A soft mantle around the mountains shoulders.

Twisters dropping their orbs into the lake.
Ensuring a future as the eggs ripen, grow.

Dreaming of my home, that vibrant blue.
Swirling clouds over oceans and lakes.

Earth,
disintegrated,
had to leave a long time ago.

Almost mesmerised, I reflect back.
A sense of sadness covers me.

I should accept that this is home.

Now.

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  • penman gold member
    February 14, 2009
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    wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest