Anguish blackens
Catastrophic truths
Hollow; broken
Erased from lives
{suicide}
Catastrophic truths
Hollow; broken
Erased from lives
{suicide}
Author notes
Sorry...Today is the day dad died 3 yrs ago, 17th feb is official date he was found.. Thought I'd write it out
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie 10 word acrostics ":" by Luciferschild.
600 points, ended February 11, 15 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Wow this is sad. My mother committed suicide on may 11th 1997. Even though it's been that long ago, I still feel it as if it was yesterday. Sorry for your loss. You did a wonderful job at capturing your emotion. Thank you so much for entering my contest.
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this is a good suicide poem
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thankyou; this was me going through some grief of someone's suicide..
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Ooh deeply dark and empowering.
This was very well-composed
and original.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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This makes me think of how I feel at the moment. Tragic, ever so sad, but really strong. Very expressive.
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Excellent
Beautiful yet so sad.
Thank you for sharing this.
Wishing you the best.
Love Peace
campanaro


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DEEP WRITE !!!
SORRY FOR YOUR LOST -
This is so sad...I am sorry for your loss. Well done on capturing your emotions in this poem.
Mariana


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Thanks, glad It came out ok ;-) x
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very well spoken and well written. This poem very effectively channeled your pain. thank you for entering and good luck
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creative
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Thankyou x
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