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Blind Shopping a limerick

I once went to the store for some tea
I had some trouble trying to see,
I stepped on a black cat
and thought it was a rat,
but the smell, so told me it was pee.

Let me know How this makes you feel, what do you think?

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  • Eusebius
    February 12

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    Oh, I will have to agree with Amera on this one! Although I am happy it was pee and not something else!


  • Amera gold member
    February 11

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    LOL
    Yuck! I didn't know that you were a limerick artist!
    This is gross but made me laugh.

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • Tirrell
      February 11
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      yes I picked up the bug, and couldn't stop myself
      and I was reading the limricks of Mairi Bheag...