Beautiful day to awaken to
Loved by my family and friends
Each flower growing especially for me
Sunshine on my son's laughing face
Stars in the moonlit sky
I'm learning to be grateful for the things that I have
Not what I feel has passed me by
God sneaking into my heart
Stunning me with happy life
Author notes
acrostic
Written February 21st, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- One Hour Contest Lucky #13 by Samplette.
300 points, ended February 21, 2004, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow, this is really good! i usually don't care for acrostics, but i thought i would check one out, and i am glad i did! i especially liked the descriptions for b,l, g, and the last s. very nice! i loved it! =D
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And a lovely acrostic this is. Nice. Blessing are incredible positive happenings, least expected so in very welcome when they do. Thank you for reminding us to keep our eyes on faith and the future and to know God sneaks into our hearts always. A treasured piece. Thank you. I can sleep on this one tonight! Lol.
--Kel
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you know i don't think i've seen this poem before...i really like this, it is true about you ya know...you are changing, and it's beautiful...just like you
...you know that you are great so i won't bore you with that..hehe..great job! you rock!!!! Love you a million times over and over...keep doing what you do sis...
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Yea! I love this one! It's easy to forget our blessings when you're busy doing the busy mom/wife/work thing. I could really relate to this and love to read when others recognize how wonderful life can be when we are truly in the moment!
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A beautiful acrostic and wonderful in its uplifting message.Life can be so much better if we can always count the numerous blessing that have come our way and instead we sit and feel miserable by cocentarting too much on the things that passed us by.Very thoughtful and thank you for sharing this.Best wishes.
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This is so wonderful. It makes me feel so happy and blessed. I know that I am blessed in so many ways and this poem just points them out. Terrific job on this. I love it.
Becca -
What a blessed person you are
You have personified what everyone would like to achieve someday A beautiful write for someone so beautifully blessed! All my best 
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I really like this. Sounds like a wonderful world of blessings.
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Even when there is pain, I am blessed to be alive. Life is so full of blessings and you've done well at pinpointing out yours. Well done
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Sounds like blessings to me. You create your words wonderfully in your acrostic.
Thank you for entering.
Sam
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