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Teddy Bear

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear,
Oh, Where can you be?
I've lost you my stuffed friend;
Please come back to me.

You became
My most valued friend,
When my 'rents
Got you just for me.
We've been pals
These sixteen years now,
And we've shared
Lots of laughs and glee.

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear,
Oh, Where can you be?
I've lost you my stuffed friend;
Please come back to me.

You were here
Early this morning,
Just after
My breakfast and tea.
But you are
Now gone from my hands,
Disappeared
Without any plea.

Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear,
Oh, Where can you be?
I've lost you my stuffed friend;
Please come back to me.

Author notes

I've never had a teddy bear, but I still have a stuffed-animal-seal that I received as an infant. And i used to lose Snuggles the seal from time to time when I was little.
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  • Pisces rainbow
    February 12, 2009

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    so cute and such a lovely rhyme

    such a fun delight to read my friend

    sooo well done

    God bless you...


  • debilynn
    February 11, 2009

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    well written. filled with strong emotion. i hope you found your bear by now. thank you for entering and sharinbg your amazing talent. keep writing poet. God bless you always