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Hello Brain

Hey there stranger,
looking at me with those sad brown eyes.
Tell me,
where have you been sneaking off to hide?
Did all the crying frighten you,
when our emotions did collide?
I know it wasn't a pretty sight,
but darling I really did my best to try.
Now he promised that he'd stick around,
and although you dont believe him,
i'd like you to give it another go,
and help me through this lovers show.

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Gah. I just wish my stomach would stop feeling all doom and gloom.

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  • GotLilt
    February 11
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    Not sure who has the sad brown eyes . Very sad.
    {{{{{hug}}}} for you