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Kiss

Kinetic energy released
Intense contact
Salivating libidos
Sucking licking tongues

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Prompt: Acrostic In 10 Words

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A contest entry

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  • songstress80
    October 28, 2009

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    huge congrats on the gold trophy win on this one.

    a truely excellent short acrostic write. i love it! you basically defined a kiss and described what it's all about...lol. great job! wonderfully written. i just can't give enough praise here. maybe it's just because i love kisses...hahaha!!!

  • trekkergirls bank
    June 18, 2009

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    well I guess that is definitely one way to discribe a passionate kiss. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • hyper thing
    February 12, 2009
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    I liked it


  • Harrisham Minhas gold member
    February 12, 2009
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    Wonderfully expressed.
    Congrats on the Gold.



  • KayJay
    February 11, 2009

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    A great write, my friend... if you're up for kissing, I'm guessing you're well on your way to recovery Congratulations on the gold!
    Ken


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    February 11, 2009
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    Hahaha I LIKE! x


  • Luciferschild
    February 11, 2009

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    intense and sensual in a childish teenage sort of way. Definitely will think of this next time i kiss someone (which hopefully will be soon)!! thank you

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