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She Falls Asleep

Sounds of sorrow in her ear,
all she dreams about is fear,
She falls asleep,
for you!

Another night alone alone in bed,
all her hopes and dreams are dead,
She falls asleep,
for you!

Only darkness does surround,
every loneliness is found,
She falls asleep,
for you!

Beaten up and left for dead,
can not make it back to bed,
She falls asleep,
for you!

  . . . . .

She falls asleep,
and all she dreams about is you!
When she's asleep,
the air she's breathing is for you!
Take her in sleep,
and then forever will be you!
Please let her sleep forever,
let her be with you......

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