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Internet Love

This love cannot be...
My tears hit the keyboard as
I type I love you...

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 20

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    Brilliantly Thought-provoking...

    Thank you for sharing your melancholy Valentine's Day poem with all of us. "Internet Love" is an exceptional piece. Thank you for entering my contest, I'm wishing you all the best!! Peace, xx Cyn

  • Bruce silver member
    February 20
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    Ooops! Forgot clappies.

  • Bruce silver member
    February 20

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    DB - hey, this is very good! I think it's especially poignant for many AP folks!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 19
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    Beautiful melancholy...

    This is a wonderful haiku, one of the best modern senryu poems that I've seen yet; three small lines which speak volumes. Thank you for sharing your muse's talents with all of us!! Wishing you all the best. Peace & hugs, xx Cyn xx


  • wiltedvamp18
    February 11
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    wow



  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 11

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    wow

    great job very little said nut it means so much great job keep it up keep no going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day

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