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i know one day
we will be together
sit and gather
you would hold my hand
and ask me to dance
and i would one day
dance with you like a queen
and i would have one kingdom
which is your heart

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  • Ellis gold member
    August 28

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    This is VERY Beautiful

    Very, very Romantic. A wonderful, beautiful poem.


  • hamid
    May 11

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    With a little change it is my dream. but hope for you it is reality and if not in present soon in the future i will be. A cute, heart touching poem.


  • Tqop
    March 24

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    Beautiful.

    Beautiful. Awesome. I loved the ending. It was so heart-warming. I was perfect. He or she would love this poem. Very good job. It took me breath away. Wow!

    I'm a fan.


    Evemauy


  • Tqop
    February 26
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    Beautiful.

    Interesting, and original.
    I liked the flow of it.


  • ginalouise09
    February 19

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    Cute

    I like the simplicity of this poem. Even though it is simple, you do a great job of conveying emotion and also passion. good job! i liked it!

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