i know one day
we will be together
sit and gather
you would hold my hand
and ask me to dance
and i would one day
dance with you like a queen
and i would have one kingdom
which is your heart
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This is VERY Beautiful
Very, very Romantic. A wonderful, beautiful poem.


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With a little change it is my dream. but hope for you it is reality and if not in present soon in the future i will be. A cute, heart touching poem.
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Beautiful.
Beautiful. Awesome. I loved the ending. It was so heart-warming. I was perfect. He or she would love this poem. Very good job. It took me breath away. Wow!
I'm a fan.
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Beautiful.
Interesting, and original.
I liked the flow of it.

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Cute
I like the simplicity of this poem. Even though it is simple, you do a great job of conveying emotion and also passion. good job! i liked it!
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