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Do the math

Did your mother ever tell you
be careful what you wish,
you might
just get it all.
but there's always a price to pay,
keep your heart in line,
forgive and forget,
like there was anything wrong.
First kisses always say the most,
but what about the second chances?
one plus two equals three.
I've done the math before,
and it didn't quite add up,
but when there's lips all over your body,
and whispers in both your ears,
your just cant ignore,
the urge to go on,
that feeling in your stomach,
the butterfly are talking,
and there not taking no for an answer.
fly me high,
do me justice,
take me far,
and please don't drop me.
one plus two equals three.

Author notes

Very unhappy with how this came out but at least i have a muze back or is it two? im not sure. this poem is me right now, happy and content to explore this, yippie.

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  • insatiable
    February 12, 2009
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    Awe this one is sweet bebe I really loved these lines .
    but when theres lips all over your body,
    and whispers in both your ears,
    your just cant ignore,
    the urge to go on,
    that feeling in your stomach,
    the butterfys are talkin,
    and there not taking no for an answer.

    Its great to see you writing again. I was wonderin who would be the first to write about this. I still cant find the words.