Thoughts loom in
Ominous darkness
Not quite lonely, just
Unhappy, thriving for love.
Upset, choises
Not wise
Selfish, immature
Not thought out.
I had decided
But my heart
Undeniably large, pained with
Forbidden love
Was broken
Two sorrowful halves
Aching for him
Wishing for a fairytale that I presumed
Would never come.
Why so optimistic?
Why so sure?
How could I think that love was
So very pure?
Well, truth be told
I missed him.
Emotions tinged with
Grim, uneasy solemnity.
Wasn't exactly greedy;
More longing for passion without solitude;
Someone to think about at night
Smile when you see them again.
So I was lucky,
That fateful day
Perhaps destiny?
Was it possible that I was once again in love?
So much in common
So little we knew
It was meant to be
And I speak of the truth.
When you spoke the words
That I wished for from the
Time I met you
My answer is obvious, the ending of a story I have just told.
Yes, I love you.
Yes, I need you
All the time
Longing for you when you're not there.
Even if you're not mine
For as long as I hoped
I will always remember
How you healed my heart
Assisted me when I just couldn't cope.
I love you now
It's easy to see
You sealed the gap
In my grieving heart
That now soars like a bird set free.
I'll never know
Why I loved that one boy
Who now seems petty to me...
I believe that is how you came into my life.
Author notes
THIS is a poem i wrote randomly so im gonna post it to this contest.
A contest entry
- A Quick Valentine Contest by A-muse-in-writer.
1500 points, ended February 16, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
you like???
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heyyyy this is sooo good !!! it about alec!!!!
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EMILYY
haha yeah it is!!!!
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I believe in line 5 choises should be choices.
What a tribute this poem is to the one who one your heart.
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GotLilt,
Yes, I'm really sorry about that! I was typing quickly as this poem was made on a basis of 10-15 minutes.
Thank you so much! Yeah, it's about someone I thought would be perfect for me and then my current boyfriend who really changed my mind.
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well thank you
Wrote randomly? It seems like it was written for some person who helped you overcome the loss of love and in doing so captured your hard. A very lovely write and thank you for the entry.
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A-muse-in-writer,
Yup! It was definitely wrote randomly, haha. Thanks so much, and yes, you're exactly right; it's about thinking I was in love but it didn't turn out right. And then I found someone who helped me through and I'm now going out with You're welcome! I like entering contests!
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Very touching and romantic piece. Filled with hope and true love.
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FaeFeverTears,
Thanks soooo much! I hope you empathize along with my feelings for this poem. I really thought hard to make it come together, and I know there are some rusty parts of it that could use fixing, but I'm actually really proud of this piece as it was made in about 10-15 minutes.
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