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Fun and Games, a limerick

One night I was drinking my whiskey
And soon felt I was rather frisky,
I leaned to kiss my wife
Then she pulled out a knife
As she cuffed me to bed, so risky.

Let me know How this makes you feel, what do you think?

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  • Amera gold member
    February 11

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    hehe...
    Smart wife I'd say. So you like your whiskey do you?


    Love,
    Amera♥


    • Tirrell
      February 11
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      Whiskey does hit the spot once in a while.. Sue me I'm Irish


  • Jalalbad gold member
    February 11
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    hehe


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 11
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    Oooo, intersting tale here. Love it!