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Old Salem Limerick

I drove out to the hills of Salem
And drove around, looking for ail'em
To the town on my stay,
I had nothing to say.
So they grabbed me rough saying Jail'em!

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  • Amera gold member
    February 11, 2009

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    LOL

    humm, this is now the third limerick I have read by you tonight. You must have picked up the bug somewhere.

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • Tirrell
      February 11, 2009
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      I havn't written many of these, I sort of have to have that odd mood in order to write these..


  • Jalalbad gold member
    February 11, 2009
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    O this is funny!


  • AnaelCathetelEcanus silver member
    February 11, 2009
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    LOL, I really liked this. Awesome write, Tirrell!


  • suseann
    February 11, 2009

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    "Ail'em" meaning to peck a fight? Or about driving under the influance and having no defense? Either way,it gives the giggles in reading.

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