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Love Now Lost

Dreaming of the return
Wishing you will come back to me
I want to see you
Feel your arms warm around me
Holding me close
Wishing I could be the one for you
Holding my breath
Your love is strong
Just not for me
You see her
Nothing else matters anymore
An unfinished conversation
A heartfelt hello
None of it matters
She’s in your sights
          On your mind
The rest of us go unnoticed
I’m left living in a dream world
One where you have love for me
Where it’s me you drop everything for
All I can know for sure
I could be the one for you
If you could see me
But since you cannot
What do I have left??

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just came to me in class so i put it on here.

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  • FyreFox
    March 2, 2009
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    Very touching....

    i like it very much... and your reading over my shoulder anyway- so yeah... lol.


  • Her hand in yours
    February 17, 2009

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    Powerful, and very touching, such pain and love here from your heart, because of your feelings for her...

    I hope you're feeling okay jenn and everything's better there too...


  • baconlicious112
    February 11, 2009

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    D: I really liked this one. But it's sad. Feel better J-Dawg!


    • wish you loved me
      February 12, 2009
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      I wrote it in hte middle of theatre class. he sent us to the library for research stuff... and thats what i did.


  • xKrista
    February 11, 2009

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    this is amazing!
    there's a lot of emotion in this piece.
    great job!

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