Sweet insanity
Leaves me where I am now.
My spirits low
My soul no longer at ease
Exhaustion
I can't make believe anymore
Where is my passion now?
Fatigue
I can't hold myself up to you any longer
Why do these tears leave me stranded?
Denial
You don't know me. Understand me.
Please just forget me.
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Don't know why...
Written February 21st, 2004
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Nicely expressed Scarlett.....
Great emotion and imagery........Background contrasts well.....
Great writing.......Lisa
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Scarlett
Amazing write, with intense emotions
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Karen
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this is a good poem and if you think about it you can figure out the way i can relate to this and i have to agree with everyone before that the clouds is a nice touch to it.
keep up the great writes
~ur sis~
Gem -
I can relate to thing poem...especially lately...everything and everyone needs something and I don't have the time to do them because I'm so tired of everything
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Love is a tricky thing eh? Don't worry, Miss Scarlett, your stronger than you think you are, we all are infact, and you can get through anything you want to. Keep being strong hun.
s for you.
Blue
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I really like this. Its really good. Haha your name reminds me of Scarlett O'Hara in Gone With the Wind. Thats my favorite book.
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i like how you added states of depression in between your stanzas its kinnda neat. -
awesome
Nice, creepy AND nice.I like the background too. The poem is so personal and amazing. Wow, so sad, ,just kind of depressing to read. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Peace and love
MAD -
i like the background to this poem!!! where did u get it?
x0x0~CaNdIe~
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