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Sounds Of A Lonely Heart

Caught up in the termaoil
fed by necessity,
Those soft spoken words
love is what it seems.
Tossed the dice
played the game,
embraced life we so played
Yet the sounds that followed
a heart so hollow,
broken from a love gone astray .

The heart holds silent tears,
lonely rooms and a heart of fear.
Sounds they say of a lonely heart,
fell to his whispers
and played the part.

The liar walks off
so proud indeed,
his lies took what was
so precious you see
A doll broken
and feeling shame this day,
she allowed to let love go astray.

I am the poster girl
I gave my consent,
for to believe the whispers
my sole became bent.
Devil in disquise
young boys out to feed,
and through their lies
are allowed to take the lead.,

Leaving hearts full of silents
only his whispers remain.
Lonely room and a heart full of fear,
life is no longer the same.
Sounds they say of a lonely heart,
carries whispers loud and clear.
Sounds only the one left behind can hear.

Often it takes one devil
for lessons to be learned,
You have learned to give as a child
the heart gets burned.
Children just learning
so cruel in their displays,
takes and takes uncareing
of those left along the way.

You left behind the whispers
your mama warned you of,
the one who has raised you
with such love.
You chose to believe a stranger
and the way he made you feel,
only to find your mom was right
for with the devil you made a deal.

All boys are after one thing
so young their love
comes with a sting
They are just experimenting
so do you play along
if so they feel nothing as you are
left with a song unsung

Move on to the next
they never look back,
a notch on their belt
is what it comes to in fact.
When will the young girls  learn
to not give of themselves for love,
for you see once taken your left behind
as the young man leaves and move on up.

Be the happy one and learn to say no,
see how fast they leave and to another move on.
Not to worry when you are young for many their are,
only you wont ever let them take and break your heart.   







Author notes

When a young boy whispers in your ear you are the one I will love you forever and a day You give me life you are my everything why do you truly think he is tlling you all these things . He is pursuading you to give him what he wants and he know if he is sweet enough and hang around long enough he will make you believe it is true .But then afterwards what does he do .
He begins to ignore you wont take your calls and dodges you in school and when you do catch him just ignores you and in a rush to go somewhere else . Tell me for you cant take back what he has taken and tyou are all broken and sad and he is with his friends having a great time . You see you didnt take anything from him for you werent lieing to him . Sad it is and I so hope the young ladies realizes giving them what they want never has since the beginning of time ever held a man . And it never will .

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  • maralisa silver member
    February 11, 2009
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    bravo patty a wonderful poem thank youfor sharing maralisa