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haiku: spring






Leaves melting
beneath a cold snow,
sunlit mornings




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  • NJSem
    March 8

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    Ahh! Spring is coming!

    I love this ! As I woke to a clock that wasn't yet set an hour ahead the sun was shining and the snow starting to melt. The four seasons are not appreciated enough, but this Haiku surely is.


  • MermaidSinging
    February 13

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    I don't think haiku's get enough credit. Especially one's that capture the mysteries of nature so wonderfully. Thanks for my morning reflection.


  • Mr.
    February 12
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    Beautiful.