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take it away, what you want

she pushes you up against the wall
are you sure you're ready?
by the look in her eyes you can tell
there's no turning back now
it doesn't matter what has to be done
this has to be done
she drags you along, like you have no choice
but you're here for a reason

i'm searching for the end with you
and if this is the only way to find it
then you can bring on the heartbreak

she tells you to be quiet
although she knows you'll tell
lust filled dreams dance in her mind
was this all really worth it?
oh no, we've got to stop
you can't give me what i need
i'm dancing around crossed lines
and feeling too at home
take this away from me
before i can't take it

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  • ArrowCobain
    February 11
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    this is not really so much a poem, as just random thoughts...