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garden fairy

a garden fairy i maybe
I sprinkle dust and spread my weed
flying around at the speed of light
making sure my crops grow right
I smell the bud like never before
hoping praying that its galore
yes, it is it never fails
the bud I grow your can't compare
don't worry when the supply runs out
Ill be in the garden playing about
waving my wand round and around
only in my bag of surprise
you can find new kinds of highs

 

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  • Forgotten Anomaly
    March 22

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    I love this, the idea is wonderful but you need to proof read this, off the top of my head I remember maybe-may be, ill-I'll, and you need to capitalize your I's. Otherwise this is a good poem.


  • Serenity-words
    February 25
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    This was good

    I love your ideas here, but remember to always capitalize your I's, and always make sure your poems flow.
    Other than that, wonderful job!


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 23

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    you have not followed the rules so i am disqualifying this write. thank you for your time. viyanna rosemarie


  • hamid
    February 11

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    Beautifull poem. a cute and innocent poem thanks poet for sharing this with us. I really like it. Specially the main idea. Great work
    Be happy
    Ali