Cataclysmic

The night is behind me

the morning has come.
when daybreak arrives

the cattle will run.

For up in the sky,

where blue clouds once hung.
a bright pulsing light

now fights with the sun.

Too many warnings,

but nothing was done.
When God raises anger

he fights with the sun.

Do we have moments

a flash then we're gone.

The night is behind me

the morning has come...

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diseasedpoet
October 25
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not quite the same style different
aboomer
March 14

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Lovely flow in this. I like your wording, images, emotion. An enjoyable read.
nicely done
thank you for your entry
best wishes in the contest
Judith Chandler
March 5
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This is a great write. It's the essence of how it would be, I think, and there's a sense of doom.
Ti Amo Te Quiero
February 11
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please put your name in AN. And option no.
herrlurch
February 11

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Awesome! I found the atmosphere of this poem very peaceful. If I didn't know the rest of your work... LOL However, there is something creepy, looming, towering in the air which makes it all uneasy. I enjoyed it mostly for the regularity in metre and rhyme (perhaps I'm really that easily satisfied...) and for this special mood. Well done. Best of luck in the contest, Götz