Dream Time Vamp
Waking in the dawn
I remember my dream
potions of fire calling me
and the face so familiar
A friend from my present
only differently cast
day light distant,dream time phantom
holding the hourglass
Watching the blood trickle down
from the punture ever so slight
sealing my fate of forever night
stealing the light of day?
Burning lust alights inside
a wish for a healing recourse
measure the darkness by the light
save the loving heart
Together we work in the twilight
working for the good of all?
a charm for who
what is it I can't recall?
Twig of willow to cast the spell
aroma of cinnamon oil and rosemary
crystal wand swirling round
to bless the token of what?
Feel the energy swirling around
drawing champion heart for its own
demons and dragons watching on
as a new warrior is born
Life in another time
work still undone
together we struggle
to undo the past, change the future of what?
A kiss of forever upon my lips
why is my soul crying?
An aura of hunger lust surrounds me
need is building up inside
Here with me in the present
but crafting are not what it seems
my dreams call you another
my past life's are haunting me...
Do you remember what or who we seek?
A contest entry
- There can only be one! (The Immortal Dark Bard) by Dark Otter.
700 points, ended February 28, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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congrats on the trophy....there is love , loss , longing and some amount of mystery in those lines....
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congradulations on the green thingy
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I am surprised!
you gave the prompt a unique twist that will have to be recognized for its creativity. I see this as a finalist. Well done!
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made me feel as if i were seeing your dream, "Do you remember what or who we seek?" i've questioned like this before myself... beautiful write
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This is very magical. I like the questioning you've done.
It makes me think of spell work though, when one can't remember what the hell there doing throughout the course of it lol
Sweet formatin. Love the visuals and rhythem.
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will dream on this one my friend
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Beautiful!
This was a super stanza: Twig of willow to cast the spell / aroma of cinnamon oil and rosemary
crystal wand swirling round / to bless the token of what?
Absolutely magical! Makes me think of that mythic era Aussies call the Dream Time. Ooops, I'll bet you're an Aussie!
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no my love
she is Canadian and my next door neighbor!!!!!!!!! -
Maybe in another life...lol! Love dream time though!
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Hello Seawitch,
Glad to have found your poetry. Such rich imagery paints a lovely scene. Can't wait to see the revisions.
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