Every minute turns into an hour
that i persistently push
to make the ticking of time faster
But why does each hour turns into an endless midnight?
How many years will i wait for tomorrow?
Author notes
prompt: waiting
A contest entry
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A single moment in time can stop and become a mortal eternity when you long with undying anticipation to be cradled in the arms of the future.
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I love the way you have achieved so aptly the sense of endless longing and waiting in a few powerful lines. Very well done. Just my humble opinion, but I felt the poem could have ended powerfully with the line, How many years will i wait for tomorrow?
But I like your ending as well. Thank you so much for your entry. -
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thanks for the comment.
it's already an honor to be part of your finalists.
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its amazing how when we want something the time crawls. very nice way to describe a sort of slow agony.
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thanks for taking time to read.
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