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A blackened Sunset

Keep your words, I've no use,
For in my dreams, I'll have a noose.
And while I sleep, I'll kill myself,
And wake up being someone else.
And when I rise, I hope to see,
A muted world, clarity.
My apathy fixed to erupt.
A sunset blackened sky.
A sacrifice for my soul,
To leave my body lie.
I do not know why love is feared,
But I am never scared.
And now that it is muted,
To be louder, I am dared.
So I'll free my tongue and sing out loud,
For heaven and hell to hear.
To fill the void within my heart,
I'll wipe away my lonely tear.
As I approach my final door,
Before I stumble through,
I'll give sound to the world,
And say a prayer for you<3

Please, let me know how I can improve! Thank you!

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  • AngelxXxDust
    February 12
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    very well liked

    I personally liked it. I am a dark writer most the time myself. I really enjoyed reading it. The emotion you have in it is just astonding and its short but hits an emotional nerve thats the best kind of poetry written in my book. I loved it! keep up the good work and I hope to read more from you.

    ~rebel~


  • Valley Girl silver member
    February 12

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    Welcome to All Poetry

    A very dark write about starting over. I hope that you were able to express your feelings in this write. Thank you for sharing this with us.
    Sarah
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