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The Repose of Unambiguity

Your words, so trite, severed my composure,

drenched in ambiguity, woved a patchwork of deceit.

I gauge my spirit to no longer  seek refuge in the zone

of dejection you revile it to.

 

Forlorn is the entity that defines itself holier

for being revered, for being chosen.

Overt were my laborings of unrequited passions,

yet never contrite was your rejection.

 

Centered in the hazy mist of  my yearnings,

banging my head against the  vine of rigidity of

your emotions, I created the quintessential you.

From my heart's eye, a masculine perfection.

 

A dream, a dream needled in the fabrics

of a tattered tapestry, held together by the

pins of a unyielding contenance,

I stand jinxed, I plead drained.

 

I propose a writ, bearing my heart's signet.

Incarcerate the entrails of  such a deceptive

composition, I find you guilty of feigning

to be a man, sentenced to a soul revival.

 

With my savior, Xanax, let me annotate

the kin I felt to the ramblings of a sane, though

disheartened mind, yet I am no longer confused,

you are no longer empowered to infuriate me.

 

I am so blown away by the repose of unambiguity!

 

 

marjorie joyce leslie

02/11/09

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i think i used everthing except sile.

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  • penman gold member
    March 8, 2009
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    Wonderful

    Such a great creation. And so deserving of the silver. Congratulations.


  • MuseStalker
    February 13, 2009
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    This didn't have your "voice" and I realized why in one of those "doh" moments of clarity when I read....yes, actually read.... the previews and notes. I miss your upbeat "take on life" in this one, which I'm assuming is a result of meeting the contest's requirements. Great job, by the way, getting all but one of those very interesting contest words into this one. Missed you.

  • A-muse-in-writer
    February 12, 2009
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    hmmm

    quite a vocabulary here. Well written.