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Oh God

Oh God the screams just wont stop
Vivid imagery of hate and lust
Fill the morbid mind that wont
Rest until it's eaten through
The last withering sane thought

 

 

Oh God the cries wail into the long
Night, disturbing even the dead
With feet pounding on frail hearts
In spite of the begging spirit
Throwing up in prideful disgust

 

 

Oh God take the pain away, I don't

Need to feel the stabbing knife of

Love gone wasted anymore, the

Endless nights are ravaging me

To the point of no return

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I cannot sleep.. It's driving me insane.. I'm going through nightmares once again.

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  • goalsv
    February 1
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    This writting is great, has a look and feel of the insanity and hoplessness as it glides across the page. Nightmares are scary and tirering and that is felt in this one.


  • jsweenor
    December 13, 2009

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    Impressive

    This poem makes me fill like a voyeur looking into the mind of the heartbroken on a sleepless night.


  • XRainbowliciousX
    June 25, 2009

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    I think you did a good job of really describing how you felt..but of course we can't be inside your dreams..but this was really good..


  • awannabepoet
    May 14, 2009

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    Man I so loved this poem, Oh god why must I live this uncherished life for I do not know if I am no longer worthy or I am not welcome in what I thought was my own life.

    I like it, I like it so!

  • Ready for 2010
    May 11, 2009

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    HI

    This poem is OUtstanding. Ure writing in amazin n u have great talent.. Loved the way this poem is written with ful of heart. Alsome write.. Keep the ink flowing...


  • Wolf-Gal
    April 29, 2009
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    wowzerz srry childish imma emo depressed kid so rock on gal

    wow i wish i could write like that


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    April 8, 2009

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    wish i didn't read it
    tears
    too painful naa
    wish we never born
    so tht we never get some one to love and share

    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • nitelite
    March 30, 2009

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    i love when yo say "night, disturbing even the dead, with feet pondeting on frail hearts" i just love the way ur put those words together..the emotion is grea


  • hks
    February 25, 2009
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    your a fuckin genius

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