Cold sensations ripple through
my chest as you bring the ice
slowly around caressing
my nipples as your breath
(heats things up a bit)
Our breathing quickens in unison
as you glide the solid cube
down to my stomach as the
goose bumps ripple my flesh
(you make me shiver)
Hot breath and cold ice bring about
sensual relief as we cradle each other
under the covers of unmarked desire
bringing about loves wanton fire
(as the ice melts my skin)
Author notes
Picture: Mick Payton-Ice
A contest entry
- Pre-Write Extraganza No Limit by poets whisper.
900 points, ended February 16, 96 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ICE-adults only by JinSays.
1006 points, ended February 16, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you imagine?
Comments
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I mean damn.
You've melted me into a big puddle with this.
Thank you.
Love,
jin
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wow this is amazing. good luck in your contests.
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sigh ... now to the cold showers! I could have used this yesterday ... thank you for entering the contest.
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Nice. . . artistic and very senual. . . not just a porn script as many people write. Well done!
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wow
i agree with markgrif very hot but cold lol great job i love it so much very sexy great job keep it up keep on gping stay ture stay sic peace out and have a nice day -
Hot... I mean cold.. I mean nice ice!
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