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Meltdown

It feels like can't bare doing this anymore,
I can't always pretend to be so strong,
tears slowly start flowing down my face,
where, sadly, it feels like they belong.

I'm not the girl I am on the outside,
I'm not as held together as I look,
some of my friends dont even know,
because I keep it hidden behind a book.

Most of you will never know the girl inside,
because, hopefully, she won't hang around,
the "not so strong me" will go back into hiding
and will remain there until my next meltdown.

Author notes

yeah, i was kinda having a meltdown and totally stressing out when i wrote this. Have I ever mentioned how much I HATE school?

i'll edit this after i kinda calm down and finish hypervinalating (sp?)

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  • The.poet.of.hearts
    February 20

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    Ohh, ho, so much pain, and tears . let my clean my cheeks
    well, if you won't go to school, how would you be a good mother then?

    Don't you want to teach your own children?
    Wish you all the best
    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


    • Missa
      February 20
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      i dont want to have kids. im still going to school, i never said i was going to drop out. i just got a little stressed out about a biology test. lol. im normally a very happy person. its just for some reasons my poems are almost always depressing.


  • Tqop
    February 18

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    Sad.

    I am 25 taking online classes. I know how you feel. I don't like school either. It's way too stressful. But I liked you're poem and how you expressed yourself.

    Feel better, Okay.

    Evemauy


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 17

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    I can't always pretend to be so strong,

    Honey, I've been there. You should never have to pretend to be strong. If you don't feel that way, find someone who cares about you and open up to them.

    I'm not the girl I am on the outside,
    I'm not as held together as I look,
    some of my friends dont even know,
    because I keep it hidden behind a book.

    ^^This looks like a page from book also. I can say it a million times, there is noone who knows me like the pages of my journal.

    I love the title of this. It goes hand in hand with everything you wrote.

    Great write


  • Never Known
    February 12

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    Like panic attacks...

    I love this poem. It speaks the truth to more people than you think. To me it is part of MY life and always will be. Keep up the greath writing love.

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