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Willow

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Willow trees bend for me...
in the fields where the
daffodils mingle, butterflies collide.
Sweet honey my Bumble bees provide.

Gentle Breeze that gently stirs within
meadow grasses wave ... in crystal streams we bathe.
Let this love begin again...

Gone...swept away ...gone there that day.
Can't you see what they mean to me...

I can still hear the voices singing ...all the old tunes they are bringing.

would you like to swing on a star?
Carry moon beams home in a jar ?
Be better off than you are?

Would you like to swing on a star... they faded off in a distance.
Taking the path of least resistance.

Author notes

Sometimes we wish we could turn back the hands of time...
Not everyone will understand .

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    September 26

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    a wonderful scene you display with a lyrical quality that lends itself to the song lyrics followed by what reads to me as a bittersweet final line. nicely done.

  • mwzephyr
    July 3
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    Pleasent imagery, peaceful

    Everyone needs to swing on a star once in a while...

    • Great Surprise for me that you chose Willow to Read

      Thank you for reading and commenting on it. It resides in a corner of my heart.
      Your comment means alot to me.
      Sincerely,
      Cheryl


  • glenn shannon silver member
    April 15
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    I do and its beautiful like you

    • guardianhost gold member
      April 16
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      All our dear family and friends ...Seem some how to fade and drift away.

      Thank you Glenn for whatever reason you had for reading this one - I actually wish you could be here so I could hug your neck!
      Thank you for the kind comment
      You are a Awesome friend!
      cheryl

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