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Lies

Are they fake or not
Words slip by so easily
Trust fades past my ears

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  • Bruce silver member
    February 11

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    Great ku, my friend! And I love your background - it's inspired. The fragment that we all know: "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive" is by Sir Walter Scott, the Lay of the Last Minstrel.