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Love by Delusion

Thought the aching in my heart was love,
but I guess it was just infatuation.
I prayed to God, from up above,
to make this one an exception.

I loved him with all my heart
and more, if you must know.
I cried when we were apart,
when there, my heart was aglow.

He broke me like the others,
he shattered my heart in two.
I was hoping for a lover,
instead I landed you.

Love is just a delusion,
a lie, to tell little kids.
To cause them confusion,
believe? Heaven forbid.

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my sentiments exactly.

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    February 11
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    15/25

    a nicely penned piece


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    February 11

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    He broke me like the others,
    he shattered my heart into.
    I was hoping for a lover,
    instead I landed you.


    I really like this part, should it read ' in two ' ??
    Sad poem. Well written has a nice flow to it.