A trembling hand and an aching heart
Recipe for misery, etched in parts
Truer intentions never existed
than those I hold tight to in my head
Stiffen that quivering lip
Hold on to those sarcastic quips;
Neither will be required this day
For today will mark a change in ways
Differences in thinking will - or may -
make me: Make me better, Make me smarter, Make me wise
Time now, to grow: Make some ties, break some ties
Eliminate the toxicity that causes a morose mind
Think slower, speak more efficiently
I will challenge.. ME
And I will learn, and I will grow, and I will..
JUST. BE.
Recipe for misery, etched in parts
Truer intentions never existed
than those I hold tight to in my head
Stiffen that quivering lip
Hold on to those sarcastic quips;
Neither will be required this day
For today will mark a change in ways
Differences in thinking will - or may -
make me: Make me better, Make me smarter, Make me wise
Time now, to grow: Make some ties, break some ties
Eliminate the toxicity that causes a morose mind
Think slower, speak more efficiently
I will challenge.. ME
And I will learn, and I will grow, and I will..
JUST. BE.
Author notes
Written at the Ike Box in Salem, OR Fri January 23, 2009 while eating an apple and sipping a white chocolate mocha at a little table in a corner, lost in thought. I think it was my first of the year - and I've written one other since, I believe. Maybe this new year will inspire me.
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Comments
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so emotional..lovley write.
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great
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this rocked my socks. i love it. its so.... so... i dunno. theres no words in my vocab to describe this
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wow this is a very intense and emotional write. the flow was good great awesome. keep writing


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this is very good; very deep. it is amazing the kinds of things that go through your mind when youre just sipping coffee. good job on this one.
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