Death absconded with my soul,
Pleasured by the bleeding 'whole'.
Blessed tiny orange tabs,
Buffer griefs ruthless stabs.
Keeping close through misery's time,
Loyal in their seductive design.
Promising to anesthetize,
Never tiring of my cries.
Rattling in their soothing splendor,
Consistent tunes of sweet surrender.
Secured adoringly within my purse,
Increasing in harmony as they rehearse.
Tempting me with easy swallows,
Leading me gently to the waiting gallows.
Partner of mine...
Chasing after me through misery's time.
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oh god darlin you are just amazin aint ya,i swear darlin you have so much passion and pain coming through your art,you are a true artist,you paint your emotion upon that screen beautifuly
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Awe shucks,J.K. thank you,
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Wow...
That had a great rhythm... keep fighting!
Promising to anesthetize,
Never tiring of my cries.
That was my favourite part... -
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Thanks much
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damn..
sometime this dark shouldn't be so eloquent and flowing , yet it is..i truly hope you never give in and never give up my friend..
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Thanx and nope won't give up... I can't, I have kids depending on me and besides if I did somethin like this I know that when I got to the other side the first thing he'd do would be to file for another divorce LOL.
But thanx for your comment and friendship
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