my words sang color,
variegated past the depths
of my soulful blue
Author notes
Haiku 5-7-5
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XLII - by Bear by Arkbear.
500 points, ended February 17, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Whatever!!!
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From someone who knows blue
let me say this is the very essence. It doesn't get any more blue.
From singing color to soulful blue, this says to me, "I know your deepest dreams. I know you."
What an exceptional piece of writing. Maybe it's not genius, but then, maybe genius is overrated.
I loved this little poem. It's going to be circling 'round inside my head for days.
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wow
so little words, and yet so beautifully sad, i can feel the emotion in this piece..so blue, thanks for sharing and congrats on the HM
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Gosh....this is so pretty....you are up against a lot of great entries.....I am shocked that AP will not allow more than 5 HM's
Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful KU' with us......with me
God bless,
Bear ~
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Really a good Haiku
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wow this was great
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Very nice. I like the way you have used colour to illustrate the rise of emotion here. Best of luck in the contest...alby
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nice
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