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Open Victim

You throw your words at me,

They cut like a knife.

Now all I have is open wounds,

For you to just make bigger.

Do you see me,

Do you see the pain you’ve created for me.

These emotional scars are because of you,

Because of your hurtful words.

Look into my eyes,

Tell me what you see.

The emptiness in there,

That was caused by you.

I don’t know if this was your goal,

I couldn’t really care.

Just know that because of you,

I’m an open victim to the next person.

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Written December 2nd 2008

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