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Phrases

"Just my luck," she says-
But I can't stand that phrase
"Forget about it!" I insist-
But she looks at me pissed
"No one understands.." she complains-
She's driving me insane
I think to myself-
"They are all the same."

Author notes

As a teenager, I have to deal with teenage girls who all whine the same. This is my resentment. ^.^

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  • The Fun House silver member
    February 22

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    Ah very cleverly done, those phrases we have all heard time and time again. and this certainly put a humerous smile on my lips reading. well done.
    Good luck in the contest.

  • I like this. I'm a teenager myself and I sometimes say these things. It makes me laugh at myself. Great job. Good luck with this