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Star of Hate

In shards of the past I can revisit you
And you don’t remember me at all
But I can’t forget, I cannot forgive you
And I swear, I’ll live to see you fall

This is my fate
This is my right
This star of hate
My guiding light

I will return it
As I receive it
A chance to end it
Chance to grieve it

Think you’ve won?
Well think again
I am the storm
I am the rain

I will haunt you
I will hunt you
Until I smell the terror on you

There’s only poison dripping from my smile
There’s only ugliness in me
Please come keep me company just for awhile
And I will be there for your last scream

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  • BlackRose21
    February 10

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    Powerful emotions on this one... and quite honestly I'd hate to be on the receiving end... LOL but this portrayed anger, resentment, and dissapointment in every last word. Once again powerful write...


    • ShiningKnight
      February 10
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      Thank you so much. Often, my poems come to me while I'm half-awake on some melody playing through my head. I think this one has a similar story to Phil Collins' "In The Air Tonight"; it's definitely spiteful, but more about me just getting some feelings off my chest than directing them at anyone in particular.