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Love Sin

Sunsets rising,
Unmasked disquising,
Outside hiding,
From the truth.
Lovely hating,
Souls debating,
Silence awaiting,
The return of you.
Oppositely accurate,
Mythologically wrong,
Positively inaccurate,
At the night after dawn,
I had it wrong.

Sun is setting,
No forgetting,
Strong regretting,
Of our love.
Hating sadness,
Loving love,
End the madness,
I cry above.
Stars are falling from the sky
Lights are fading in
Looking back I can't help but cry
You've commited a love sin

I don't like this. It needs a BANG ending, and I couldn't think of anything. Oh well. Thoughts?

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