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9th Saga

Void are the ones
Lift evil conspire
Yin meets Yang
Through hearts desire
Sixth is your magic
Through thousand year pass
When history contrasts
And darkness forcasts
To the stars, to the heavens
Lift the heart higher
The hunter, the fodder
And raging mother fire

Author notes

Geuss who's back? Back again? I am back. Tell a friend.

Or ya know... don't.

So we're doing Poetry in English this semester (unlike LAST semester (and it was still on the freakin exam...)) So i decided to give it a shot for old times sake, even though i've gotten into art now... that doesn't mean i can't do both right? Ya well i know that but i'm also lazy....

So here it is. An attempt to get back into the game... I remembered part of it from last year and added a few more lines to this old piece i never posted... and it took me what? 10 minutes? Yah, definetly need to stop being lazy. Anyways, i think it turned out pretty rad.

Why did i choose bright pink? Because that's the colour of the post-it note i originally wrote it on.

Bet no one can Geuss what it's supposed to be about~

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  • Silvos. silver member
    February 24

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    I like this one alot, it flows so wonderfully. Not to mention the diction is well used, along with the formatting of this poem. It is a strong poem, and I thank you for sharing it.

    Keep writing,
    Silvos.


    • HarvesterOfHearts
      February 26
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      Didn't the hot pink just about burn your retnas? Yeah. Awesome. Aaaanyways, thank you very much. I never posted it until now because it was just a little riddle/prophecy type thing i came up with for some storyline I had going in my mind. I never really thought a line from a game would be worthy to post here, but i had nothing else to post...

      Glad you liked it though. This is good to know. Maybe i'll have to be less picky about what i put on this site.