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February 9, 2009

I am unused to love
and its entanglements--
its complex dancing
pushing blooming
clutching intricacy
of movement,
rhythms of back-and-
forth reality of feeling,
and the transcendental
choice to choose you
despite the weight
of the anyways--

for I still want the
fairy tale
because I believe
it will come true
but know
it can't
and that
it's lies
will consume
the truth
of you.

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  • fallendust
    October 25

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    Wow great write! It has been a while since I read your work but after reading this I remember now how beautiful your writing is. Good job on this piece!