Beautiful dirt, you cover me in your embrace
So ragged and rough, exfoliating the past away from me.
Ink-stained lips, you kiss me tenderly
So soft, so gentle; a rain-like feel
(Simple, little whore)
Splatter me, douse me in your warm sunshine
And watch me shatter, almost glass-like
Pretty little champagne glass
So thin and frail.
(Simple, little whore)
Splatter me, douse me in your warm sunshine
And watch me grow.
~
Author notes
FeyPorciuncula/TheAbsintheFaerie
woord bank:♥
-ink
-lips
-splatter
-glass
-dirt
-sunshine
A contest entry
- The water doesn't ruin --x by Noir mariposa...x.
750 points, ended March 10, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments and Critque Welcomed Warmly! =]]
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"Beautiful dirt, you cover me in your embrace
So ragged and rough, exfoliating the past away from me.
Ink-stained lips, you kiss me tenderly
So soft, so gentle; a rain-like feel
(Simple, little whore)"
I was curious about this one, so i re-read it a couple of times
Conclusion?
I liked it
Thank you for entering,
I wish you luck
Claire x
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