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Revelations 18:7

"Giver her as much torture and grief as the glory and luxury she gave herself"

Decadence leads to grief
Indulgence begets retribution,
For all things there is a reckoning
When selfish deeds are rewarded.

Even the kindest hearts
Hide the darkest desires,
Even the purest faith
Wields a sword in the end.

Talk of forgiveness and peace
Is forgotten in the flames,
When the dark tides rise
All is washed away.

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  • debilynn gold member
    February 24
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    this is only half the scripture
    " 7Give her as much torture and grief
    as the glory and luxury she gave herself.
    In her heart she boasts,
    'I sit as queen; I am not a widow,
    and I will never mourn.' "
    you have an excellent interpretation. thank you for entering and sharing your talent. keep writing poet! God bless you always


  • Denerica
    February 11

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    The mighty sword it is, and all we went through is not in vain, and what Jesus went through will not be in vain of course, interesting favorite and well interpreted. Blessings.