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Harmony

Lava lamp light shines so bright
as colors dance within the night.
Tastes that sing in harmony
as fragrances slide silkily.
Sounds register olfactorily
compliments of LSD.
My mind, at last, is finally free
to reflect on lessons of history.
Make love, all war must surcease
and hope for a good piece…
errr… peace, I meant peace


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Prompt: Lyrics "Flower Man" by Extreme
Picture Credit: "Flower Man" by Tim Sutherland
60 words

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  • Jesann gold member
    February 12, 2009
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    Ha ha!!!
    Love the "compliments of LSD" and your ending.
    Great take on the prompt, well done.


  • Xianaria gold member
    February 11, 2009
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    Thank you for your entry ~
    Nice rhyme ~ made me chuckle at the end. Well done!


  • bluewho
    February 11, 2009
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    humm sounds like you might know a little about this LOL Great write. I always enjoy your work.


  • aboomer silver member
    February 11, 2009

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    Lovely rhyme in this - and your last couple lines...lolol.....
    Nice job!!
    best wishes in the contest


  • Paloszoo gold member
    February 11, 2009

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    That ending is priceless. Way to go! You've done a great job with the prompt! Good luck to you in the contest!


  • afroqban
    February 11, 2009

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    "compliments of LSD."

    lol that part had me laughing, i like it. this is a cool write i enjoyed it. did the prompt well


  • penman gold member
    February 11, 2009
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    Excellent

    Aww, sounds like peace in a way too cool manner. Great job. Best of luck in the contest.


  • SimplyNoodle
    February 11, 2009

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    wow

    Such good pictures your poem has created, I love the ending " errr peace, I meant peace" Keep up the good work!
    ~Chelsey


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 11, 2009

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    Oh my... such a sweet piece you wrote for the contest.. and I think both piece and peace fit the time of the Flower Child era.

    Joann


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 11, 2009

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    Painted it well !
    off the wall came addiction and the flowery dated image unfurls
    Best wishes and good luck hun
    Julie

  • AngelKat42
    February 10, 2009

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    did you have fun?? lol I love this poem actually.. love the little slip there in the end.. lol you're funny. this is a great poem.. Excellent take on the prompt

    good luck
    kat

  • Xianaria gold member
    February 10, 2009
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    Any time now I'll hold off final judging 'til later.

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