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Burned

Friendship; setting flames viciously.
You were everything I could have ever wanted
and I could have never wanted anything more.

Love; fire leaping up into the air.
keeping all around us warm. Saving me
from the cold that lay around - keeping me alive.


...


Silly me. I got so wrapped up
in everything you do
So amazed by how high
your flames jumped.
So comforted by your
sweet hot warmth
So trusting of your
safety towards me.
So I fell in so deep
trusted everything you'd do.
Soon you had me -
face in the flames.
I have never been burned so bad.

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 28
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    Aww, unrequited love is a harsh reality, I felt this one hun.

  • How true. We are all blinded by emotions. Or did I misinterpret?